Eniola personal statement 1 Word Doc
Evaluation- this personal statement was too spread out. I think that some of the paragraphs (Two paragraphs about my work experience) were related to each other instead of cutting some information in one paragraph and mere it into another paragraph. Maybe I should make my paragraphs show a little bit of enthusiasm towards my experiences.
Eniola personal statement 2 Word Doc
Evaluation- I got a good solid introduction about myself and my future ambitions. There were least paragraphs then before so at I made some improvements from my last statement. The one down side of it was again, the experience and my past eduction. In one paragraph, I’m explain about my past eduction (secondary school) another is about my work experience outside of school. Then the third paragraph is about reflecting on what I accomplished. For my next personal statement, I should write a positive conclusion on both paragraphs on what progress I gained from it.
Eniola personal statement 3 Word Doc
Evaluation- This personal statement was too spread out. I think that some of the paragraphs (Two paragraphs about my work experience) were related to each other instead of cutting some information in one paragraph and mere it into another paragraph.
Final Personal Statement Evaluation
This is last personal statement that I made. Looking back on how my personal statement has changed over the last months showed me that I put my life’s accomplished into five well detailed paragraphs. I felt over whelmed with emotions after I finish it. I showed it to my chosen universities and in the near future, I could show employers my personal statement again with new experiences and project that I done in the past.